Gajanan Mishra

Gold Star - 286,152 Points (3rd April 19sixty / Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India)

We Are Not Being Attracted - Poem by Gajanan Mishra

We are not being attracted
Society has been degraded
From truth all are separated
Being misguided and this
They said blessed but how
They forget and still
They are protected and enjoyed
What they called life.

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being misguided

Comments about We Are Not Being Attracted by Gajanan Mishra

  • Cassandra Jasmine (12/23/2013 10:42:00 AM)

    Such a short poem. Not that I don't like it, but at least you could use some punctuation to straighten out the kinks in this verse.
    Also, misguided by who/whom? I think that the poem might be better off if there were more details. However, if you like it just the way it is, keep it.
    These are just suggestions.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 24, 2013

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