We Both Could Hear Poem by Brian Kilpatrick

We Both Could Hear



I trim the fat
And you ate the meat
But you still  can't  understand 
One word I speak
I turned up the heat 
And froze our hearts
I turned on the lights but
We were still as blind
As the day we were born
I didn't listen
Even though
I had been forewarned 
They told me the price of love
Is you pay with your life
Listen to your heart
And try to do what's right
Until we finally disappear
Into the lonely night
I wish somehow
We both could hear
Our silent screams
Chilling in the air

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by BD Blood on the Tracks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Titi Dale 12 January 2013

Wow this is such a great poem! You sound to have a lot of understanding in how to express your feelings without going on and on and ON. Simply a great write! Tiegan

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