Bee Kilpatrick

Oh Winters Flake - Poem by Bee Kilpatrick

Oh winters flake
Blown by the wind
So all alone
Until you find a friend

So unique
Until one by one
You hide the fields
From the sun

You blanket trees
Melted by the sun
You tickle the streams
And it has begun

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Prose Poem

Comments about Oh Winters Flake by Bee Kilpatrick

  • Jazib Kamalvi (8/16/2017 1:08:00 PM)

    A nice poetic imagination, Bee. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (1/15/2017 11:45:00 PM)

    Exotic wintry poem poetically presented. Very enjoyable for me to read of from a hot country. Great wording and imagery wow! ! Kudos.

    U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too titled, 'pay a visit to a riverbank, pls do
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (3/4/2016 5:04:00 AM)

    Sweet drop! ! Loved the flow and rhyme too. (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2016 11:59:00 AM)

    Love the imagery in this poem, how one flake finds a friend then soon many hide the fields and blanket trees, it makes for a beautiful picture of a winter landscape in my mind. Great poem, I enjoyed it very much.10+++++++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (2/6/2016 9:24:00 AM)

    Blown by the wind
    so all alone
    until you find a friend...
    Oh, that's nice!
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 27, 2016

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