We Were Open Poem by Raymond Magabe

We Were Open

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We were intimate in our conversations
Where metaphors were built by a hundred words.
We shared the absence of our pasts
And treasured the gift in each others presence.

We confided in each others confines and found passage ways
In the secrete corners of our hearts were no one ever goes.
We made paper plains with pages from our diaries
Of painful memories when the rhyme in our words dried out.

We were intimate beyond arms reach
With the four walls bearing witness to the weaknesses on display.
We made sense when the coldness of the night creped-up
To freeze our brains into deep-sleep where our dreams waited.

We found each other when the day was fading
And she helped restore me when my faith was failing.

Thursday, March 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I had just spent an entire afternoon with a dear friend. we got talking and we lost track of time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 20 March 2014

Very beautiful. Full of feeling. Like this one!

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Dave Walker 20 March 2014

A great poem, like it.

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