Monday, November 21, 2005

Wealthy, Not Rich Comments

Rating: 4.8

High heel shoes, fancy dress,
Golden earrings look the best,
Diamond rings, each finger one,
To prove success, all is done,
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Sara Turner
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Ronberge .. 21 November 2005

Well rhymed and entertaining while still sending a message. Good one! Amicalement votre, Ronberge.

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Cj Heck 21 November 2005

Very well done, Sara. The central theme is universal and you've encompassed all aspects to weave to the conclusion. Again, well done. Warmest regards, CJ

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Charles Chaim Wax 21 November 2005

how to be happy? the eternal question which this lovely poem ponders not cash will deliver the goods but other matters necessary a fine poem

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Sara Turner

Sara Turner

Scarborough, Ontario Canada
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