High heel shoes, fancy dress,
Golden earrings look the best,
Diamond rings, each finger one,
To prove success, all is done,
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Very well done, Sara. The central theme is universal and you've encompassed all aspects to weave to the conclusion. Again, well done. Warmest regards, CJ
how to be happy? the eternal question which this lovely poem ponders not cash will deliver the goods but other matters necessary a fine poem
Well rhymed and entertaining while still sending a message. Good one! Amicalement votre, Ronberge.