Friday, January 1, 2016

Weight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take the measuring tape
around my waist

or alternatively
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Kevin Patrick
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 January 2016

Its just a plush plump periodic table of chocolate and biscuits, Take the measuring tape around and measure the strength of words of expression, In light measuring self in dream or reality gives amazing sense. Very wonderfully presented poem shared.10

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Terry Craddock 01 January 2016

'Fortunately My stomach is not yet perched to be the rim of the world' so many good lines, and was wondering about this 'As my torturous tailor measures... four nights of burgers plus fries half a pound of poultry in the finest batter from Aberdeen' how good must have been those fries :)

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Kevin Patrick 05 January 2016

Thank you! , they were prepared by Scotsmen, the people that made famous the deep fried mars bar, of course its the Irish who really know how to skin a good potato!

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