Weightless Poem by reina Lorenzo

Weightless

Rating: 5.0


You said, “im fine”
Oh It’s hard to believe
And when you said, “I’m ok’
I’m not feelin’ well
Tried to believe but, I can’t.

Hush, hush, with me, get muted
Please I need your words
You’re with me, but you aren’t presently with me
Can’t you see?
I’m weightless gaining your love
But I don’t know if you worth it
Maybe, not today.

I took a bow for this first sight
And it’s too far to look back again
But after all, it complete me,

Hush, hush, forever?
Please don’t
Be with me, stay with me
Baby please.

1/24/03

© Reina h. Lorenzo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Min Sia 14 November 2008

A deep part of you intertwined with the words you have chosen! I like this poem! A 10!

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