Saturday, July 15, 2006

Well Oiled Sundial Comments

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A leach on a statue, and small cups
of red, and purple wine, a slippery hand
enters, and spreads some darkness on
that well oiled sundial.
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Patricia Gale 15 July 2006

Deep thought, perplexed but well done with imagery.

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Allan James Saywell 15 July 2006

DAVID YOU CAN ON THE MOST ODD OCCASION HIT ME WITH ONE OF YOUR THINKING POEMS, THIS MUST BE ONE YOUR MIND WORKS IN STRANGE WAYS DAVID AND LIKE ME I THINK YOU BEG TO BE DIFFERENT WELL DONE WARM REGARDS AJS

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