I feel the motion of the sea
Pulling me where I long to be
It does not matter the time of year
Of Mother Nature I have no fear
Completely enveloped in this space
Drifting in most wondrous grace
The city's power has no face
I play with dolphins we have a race
Down to the very depths we go
I sit down on the corals low
And marvel at the currents flow
Look how it moves my mane so slow
I am a mermaid
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a very interestng point of view. I love the question at the end of the poem is a very powerful finish, it really sums up the analogy I feel you are expressing. I love the Idea of depicting humans as part animal and part human, what the Oxford academics call 'human-animals' and how you tie the tides of the universe to what can be called fate of rather the powers of mysteries of the universe if i may call it that. very interesting poem, with lots of depth. oh and don't mind my blabbering’s I really enjoyed reading youer poetry
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good rhyme, Good flow, Good story, Good job Margaret!