Margaret Beil

Rookie - 3 Points (London)

Talented Hands - Poem by Margaret Beil

Heaven is a delicate petal to nurture
Hope should not be bereft of rain and vise-versa
Should you pluck heaven from it's place
For one tender moment?
Or forever have the blood of heaven's earth running down my hands
What would you do?


Comments about Talented Hands by Margaret Beil

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/7/2012 6:20:00 AM)


    heaaaven on earth.. lovely feeling....10 (Report) Reply

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  • Hans Vr (12/28/2011 7:06:00 AM)


    very poetic, Margaret
    A wonderful message inside.
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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/25/2011 12:37:00 PM)


    Heaven is a delicate petal to nurture/
    Really amazing write! ! !
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  • Romeo Della Valle (12/19/2011 5:41:00 PM)


    A few powerful words that clearly show you potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ I am honestly moved by this great write! Thank for sharing! Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 30, 2011


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