Saturday, January 10, 2009

What Am I Becoming? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thought goes by, uttering,
What am i becoming?
Heart chase behind everything,
So, what am i becoming?
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Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam
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premji premji 27 January 2009

dear vignesh... rompa nalla kavithai... please read my poem 'the world'... 10 votes....

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Kesav Easwaran 10 January 2009

space time and matter - proportionate of these every thing...inner turmoils well expressed...good flowing verses, a bit obstructed by forced rhyming attempt...10

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Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam

Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam

Coimbatore, Tamilnadu, India
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