Wednesday, February 7, 2007

What Are We Living For? Comments

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As I walk near a watery sea
A face with no features pleads to me
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David Harris
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Pam Thomas 20 February 2007

What a wonderful first poem David. It is obvious your talent is truly in writing. I loved how this poem flowed and the hope that we all have to cling to. Thank you for sharing it. Hugs Pam

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 February 2007

I like the feeling of just going Through the same old Routine, at the start of the poem and then at the end there is some hope of better life...

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David Harris

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Bradfield, England
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