Tuesday, November 22, 2011

What Does Alive Mean? Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dog tears across the ground
digging perforations into the turf
his teeth grab the squirrel's back
He shakes his head viciously
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Robin Pratt
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John Raubenheimer 27 November 2011

Courage of this order, love in the face of death, should be celebrated. Well done.

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One of the greatest poems ive read in a while it wasnt just words, the poem itself was something to reflect on and in essense came to life itself, nicely done Robin!

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