Tuesday, December 9, 2008

*what Does It Mean? * Comments

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When you say that you love me, I don't believe it
& when you don't say, I feel i need it.
What does it mean?
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negar shahnouri
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Reihaneh Jalalian 20 December 2008

wonderful negar. a great poem i loved it. well done

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Robert Melliard 19 December 2008

This is full of the kind of contradictions love usually seems to hold, and perhaps the person you describe is hard to please, too. I'm not sure if you should repeat 'What does it mean? ' so often. Best wishes, Robert.

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Myriam Karam 09 December 2008

i luv it! ! it expresses wt's deep inside, , , somtimes the person cnt say wt does he/she feels so they just write it down.. gd luck

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