Monday, November 16, 2015

What I Feel For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sat down waiting for words
to churn out of me and spill
on the paper, empty and white;
so that the world could know
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Christine Angelica
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Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

'But I waited long and the sheet remained empty still somehow depicting my feelings in the best way, For what I feel for you whatever it is; Is beyond words, It is beyond worlds.' Very interesting lines Christine.. Really liked the way you used the metaphor of an empty sheet.. It works well and expresses the feelings really well... Thank you for sharing..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 November 2015

A beaautiful love poem passionately penned with intense emotions. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Rj Masud Reja 16 November 2015

good but try for better : D

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