Wednesday, June 13, 2018

What I Long To Do Comments

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Everyone has a dream they wish to come true,
And I'm sure there's nothing they wouldn't do,
Whether to gain money or to become a superstar,
Whatever the case it doesn't matter how far.
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Kathryn Eddy
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Dr Antony Theodore 21 September 2019

want to make differences if I can, So much more than anyone could try to comprend, I want to try even if I fail, Right now there isn't a path I wouldn't scale. powerful determnation and the desire to change in your words. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 June 2019

But what's the desire I wish to fulfill? What was in my mind that did instill? To save lives in a way open to me A live organ donor is what I'll be. to save lives. this is a noble call.. very good poem. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 July 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Kathryn. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 June 2018

I want to try even if I fail, Right now there isn't a path I wouldn't scale....powerful determination to try.... something very good and to win it. your poet's notes gives power to the poem and to the reader. thank u. tony

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