Saturday, September 28, 2019

What If I Could Comments

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What If I could be a rain
to refresh you with a
small drop of hope
to wash away the sadness of say
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Hanh Chau
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Bri Edwards 09 January 2020

What is " sadness of say" ? " because I have love you" ...i'd type " because I have loved you" or " because i have love for you" I like the poem, but some of its wording is " a little off" i say. maybe more proofreading would help? bri ;)

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Kostas Lagos 29 September 2019

I'm very happy to discover such a great poem!

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Hanh Chau

Hanh Chau

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