What Is True Love Comments

Although u seem to be small in age but that poem showing that u're not small, , u've expressed hard emotions and great metaphors that can't ur mind know it but u've proved from this poem that u're not small, , and in love there is no young or old or whatever love it can be between a mother and her lovely child, , lovely poem, , keep on writing poems like this :) rated 10+ :)

what? well a baby can love his mother...is he too young to love? ? most of people think that the world love means a thing that isn't really easy to define and everyone comes with a definition and says well stop babbling and listen to what love is...is there true love and false love? ...if so show us the mark on the genuine love so that we wont be fooled when we buy love from the markets....maybe there is chinese made love...we want the original japanese because of its good quality! ! sorry that's nonsense... while reading your poem i felt i'm reading prose..you're explaining too much what you want to say and that screws up your message and makes the poem boring....think of how can you convey the message without explaining....I was stunned when I found that you're answering the question at the end of the poem...i suppose that you leave it for the reader to let him think and read the poem once again......anyway, don't be upset and frustrated that's a good try but you can make it better and better....read about poetry on the internet and look for information resources...you know i was a sucker and poetry teachers used to insult my writings and let me down but now i'm learning and i'm doing good, , , , so you can ask my help if you want...i can send you essays written by my teacher if you are interested. thanks for sharing