What Rose Poem by elysabeth faslund

What Rose

Rating: 5.0


Smelled so sweet, for so far distances,
That it made crevices in the soul?

What rose arced the sky with brightness,
Lightning bowed to beauty?

And, not my soul, not my spirit, with you
Went the arcs...but, my heart,

Tearing apart the sky with need,
Want, warmth...that my roses made

Mountains of the crevices?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christian MERLE 06 March 2008

I like this marvellous poem.

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Ernestine Northover 06 March 2008

This is beautiful Elysabeth, a unusual way of expressing love through a rose. Delightful find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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