What You Can Be Comments

A very nice poem. Beautifully written. I have learned how to differentiate dreams from reality, to contain dissent, have self-contentment, build self-confidence, not to sulk and be reclusive when one can enjoy life, of being one's true self, to learn from our experience, to differentiate between magnanimity and humility, one need not be at the top to be felt and seen, not all is lost when one fails but it is just time to begin. So many lessons in life. 10 for this.

Sometimes we can't be the one we want us to be, The dream that we once mold will always be just dream Hard work and patience, waiting for the time to see, The outcome of hardships are never meant to be.........reality and not th dreams must rule.. what a fine imagination dear poetess....10 Reality and not the dreams It has to be like sun beams To work for it like a team It will come out like music with theme

For us to have a happy life and peaceful spirit, We do have to accept that all things, we can't get. Dreams are to be broken for somebody's best. Just be open minded, face the task to its greatest. viii If you can't be the sun in the sky so blue Because so much clouds are hiding you so. Why can't be a comet that falls high and low, Though you are rare to be seen you'll be magic to view. ix Great poem! It speaks for self straight from the heart, to hearts! not to love it, its impossible, I can't! One more ten and thousand thanks for share!

Gladden your heart, cleanse your thought, magnify your soul, Soothe your mind, strengthen with the goodness of all. Be with your friends, good or bad, please don't be annoyed, Just be yourself, don't wear a mask and you'll enjoy.................oh what a kind of inspirational poetry where every stanza glows like flecks of truth to guide the life with light of wisdom trudging even through the harrowed darkness hunting in sorrow, as if burning ember to ignite in soul the by audacity of hope yet beaconing bliss of own god from within on our path of mortality by immortality of truth, that parades with pride and prejudice of crystals of reality, wonderful write by ingenuity,10+++, thanks for sharing

So well expressed, last stanza summed it all up so well! Great read; D