Wednesday, June 11, 2014

What You Do To Me Comments

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Bright eyes, shine brighter
than the sunrise when you look
at me the stars fall from high
up above us our love is written
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Valerie Colangelo
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Colleen Courtney 12 June 2014

So many perfect and beautifully written lines in this wonderful poem! Adding to my list of favorites just for it's awesomeness alone! Lol.

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Leah Ayliffe 11 June 2014

the stars fall from high up above us our love is written my pretty baby These lines are flawless.

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Gajanan Mishra 11 June 2014

good writing, I like it, thanks. please read my poems and comment.

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