Osama Aldeyasty

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When - Poem by Osama Aldeyasty

When you give it all, and want nothing back.

When you light them warmth, and burn your hands black.

When you spread to hold, and they spread to smack.

When you hug so tight, and they stab in the back.

When you stand behind, and then they leave you alone.

When you give a smile, and then they give you a moan.

When you see all this in friends, and it repeats again and again,

Then you'll know what real life is, and how it's mean and mundane.


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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/27/2009 10:54:00 AM)


    yeah... but you know though it's sad to say and though that in the past i got bored in life, when i feel appreciated and see that i can do something, i feel very happy to live. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 27, 2009



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