When Poem by ... suzyonelittledev

When

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when you are in the darkness
alone and feeling blue
tears falling down your face
wondering what to do.

When life seems so pointless
all hope has dissapeared
And your life feels chaotic
and your faced with all your fears.

When your judgement has been clouded
and you dont know where to turn
and your mind goes into overdrive
and your bodys ready to burn.

When there is no logic or reason
and the answers you can't find
instead of taking the whole world on
just take one step at a time.

And soon you will find the answers
and the tears will fade away
and darkness will just become
a bright new sunny day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 04 April 2005

I loved this poem Suzy! ! I always enjoy this rhyming style of poetry best...great poem, very nicely written. Sincerely, Mary

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