When Poem by Roger Lewis

When

Rating: 5.0


When does the wind
blow my way.
When does love knock at your door.
When does the rain stop pouring
on our lives.
Thieves, knives, wives.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 December 2020

in Canada the wind never stops blowing just stand where you wish to but delete the wives part will you else she will u sue w/o wives one can't much do as and when well done Canadian read my poem MOM'S SMILES ASK ALL YOUR WIVES LOL 377/500

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Mj Lemon 18 September 2016

Humour and wisdom wrapped tight in metaphor. Great poem, Roger.

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