When? Poem by Leopoldo Banda

When?

Rating: 5.0


Is it wrong living in the present?
Is it wrong living in the moment?
If you think hard enough you won't know.
We could be living in the past's future.
Or we could be living in future's past.
But that doesn't matter when you are not so tall.
But everything changes, and everything goes gray as with the years you grow old and you don't feel that great.
So tell me my friend
Are we living in the past's future.
Or are we living in the future's past.
Are we still trying to find the light?
When a lot of time has already passed.
But I'll go on. With no questions asked.
So I can finally say that it was worth the time.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I think there's something wrong with this but I don't know what it is.I think I have a pretty good bas though.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anisha Nyambe 23 April 2023

there's nothing wrong with it Leopoldo. sometimes poems make sense only to their writer. it's a really good poem.

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