**~~when He Saw My Tears**~~~ Comments

Your closing stanza offers two different hopes. One is that the love will forever live in your memory so that you can revisit it in your imagination; the second is that you are reunited in the real world. Do you want both? If I were one of the jinn, you would still have one more wish.I think it should be: Make him worthy of my love and devotion. There is no excuse for a man to treat a woman so badly. If love does not make a man a better man, he has sinned against love. Seeing the tears that he caused should be enough to make any man ask for forgiveness.

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Your words flow is very beautiful. I read so many of this kind of broken-heart/love poems. But you are best..........believe me! ! ! You are best!