When I First Met You... Poem by valerie hurtado

When I First Met You...



When i first met you, my eyes fixed on you. My first 'real' crush, i knew it to be true.
I had just met you, but never talked to you. I did not know what to do.
But all i knew my heart was beating
I couldn't believe it was true.
I had found someone that i finally Liked.
and it was you.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is when i first met my high school crush. it was such a grand feeling.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 07 February 2014

Wow...Beautiful romantic poem. Loved reading it.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 05 February 2014

Not bad for a shy girl. Now we want to see you sweep him off his feet on Valentines Day.

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Emeyazia Iwe Chukwudi 05 February 2014

Awesome! Well done poet!

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