Monday, March 25, 2019

Whenin Paradise- Just Throw The Dice Comments

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WHAT a lovely cliche
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Mahtab Bangalee 26 March 2019

....side by side perhaps astride/// beautiful expression

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Lorraine Colon 25 March 2019

I love the title of your poem. When In Paradise, Just throw the Dice. There is no way you can lose - you're already in Paradise. I'm not quite sure how this relates to poetry, though. Are you saying those who write poetry have already found their place in Paradise, and should help those who are still struggling to find their way? Forgive me, but sometimes it's hard to understand what is meant when words are so cleverly strewn about.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 March 2019

Poetry is that emotion which for each one of the readers has its own compulsions and so make your own resolutions I can't cover all humans and situations perhaps ur capable ma'am thankx LC

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