Friday, August 29, 2008

When It Hurts Comments

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Sitting by the chair made of a bamboo
Nigh a tree of height I don’t know,
Lyin’ before me a green meadow too...
Thus bid my pen of words to show.
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Prandy Clark Banawan
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Hades Pandemonium 29 August 2008

Lovely work on the rhyming and its interesting how you portray the feeling of being hurt. Great job: -)

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Marvin Brato 29 August 2008

Instinctive expression of hurt, it truly signify one's sorrow and loneliness1 High marks.

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Prandy Clark Banawan

Prandy Clark Banawan

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