When Life Is A Competion, Friends Are The Motivation Poem by Rishika Goel

When Life Is A Competion, Friends Are The Motivation

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In this heartless society,
Ours was the only heartily soul.

When dear ones had crowded me with conditions,
Your love for me was unconditional.

When fake blames had pounded over me,
You were always the one who believed me.

When life was colourless,
You were the one who'd sparkles it with light.

When I was dying,
Your consolation made me alive.

On that twilight,
When all were lying on their bed,
Your one message had saved me from meeting the grave bed.

Now when I'm alive,
I love you for always being by my side.

Friday, September 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,life,motivation,pain,society,sorrow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is the story of a girl who was living a misirable life. Each day was killing her badly. This year for her was the darkest year ever.. All her friends were turning into enemies, she was pounded with fake blames and several condition. But someone has truely said 'friendship last's forever'. When no one was by her side there were her two friends who behaved like a constant support in her life. They had always believed her and loved her unconditionally. When one night this girl had finally decided to die it were the messages of these two friends due to which she is alive today. And now this girl just wishes the wel being and happiness of her friends and she can never return their favour on her.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 22 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Rishika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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