Wish You Stayed A Lil Longer.. Poem by Rishika Goel

Wish You Stayed A Lil Longer..

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Maybe we were meant to be apart
Even though you were an inseparable piece of my heart.
Life without you is none less than thorns of cactus pricking in my heart.
My path of destiny is quite Alas!
Years have passed and i'm still lying on this couch,
Remembering the happy days I can never count.
Memories of you run down my vein
Even if you're back today,
I know you'll steal my heart again!
I've waited long from my part,
Knowing none other than you can ever win my heart.
But then I wonder...
Do you even remember that we had a past together?
Another thought haunts my mind,
Is there any other woman who runs down your mind?
Is there any women standing beside you wearing a long, white gown?
You'd broken my faith,
And now I guess all those texts and messages too were fake.
My life now is none less than a shady plot,
Waiting for you to come back and colour it all.
Your presence in my life is like a sudden storm in a happy town,
Who's one visit was enough to destroy it all.
My love life is none less than a roller coaster ride...
Wish You Stayed A Little Longer With Me!
~Rishika Goel

Saturday, July 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem is about a heartbroken girl. It's been years since the boy and girl have separated but the memories never fade out.They both are in no contact with each other and are living separate lives...the girl wonders if her boy even remembers that she was a part of his life...if there he had married another women. The girl is quite depressed as she has given her heart to the boy and none other than him could love her. They had broken up because they boy had betrayed her...but still she can't forget him and will love him till her last breath. She compares her life to a shady plot.since the day the boy has left her, her life has lost the hapiness n charm.her life has become colourless and dull. It's only his love which could return her all the happiness and again fill her life with colours. The girl then calls the boy as a sudden thunder and herself as a town. This means that when everything was going fine in her life the boy one day came like a sudden thunder in her life and went away. And just his one visit in her life was enough to destroy her life at all.just like a thunder storm can destroy a town..love can also destroy lives n hapiness. She wishes if could have stayed in her life!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 23 July 2017

A great start with a nice poem, How is that? You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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