Monday, August 25, 2008

......When My Name Was Victoria Comments

Rating: 5.0

Put a woods' violet gently
In my hair...
Outside, on the veranda
Where we sat
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elysabeth faslund
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Ian Bowen 25 August 2008

Elysabeth, my feelings after reading the subject matter in your poem, were of a great sadness. I was however, very happy with your poetic skill in portraying past memories.10/10

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elysabeth faslund

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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