Tuesday, July 11, 2006

When The Bough Breaks Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hold tightly, love softly,
Kiss me with flames-
For when the bough breaks
It won't be gentle.
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Tsani Jones
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Patricia Gale 11 July 2006

Filled with so much passion, I would classify this as ' Hot' Very Hot! Wonderful read!

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***** ********* 11 July 2006

Crikey Tsani, I could do with being rocked like your poem describes, I missed out as a kid, no one sang me lullabyes. You did a beautiful job with this one. Rock a cry baby, Tai

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