Saturday, August 23, 2008

When The Sky Become Dark Comments

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When the sky become dark
The moon left with stars
I will not worry cause u with me
your eyes shine and make the light
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Mohammed AlBalushi
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Ershad Mazumder 13 October 2008

Very good theme and expression. Read it repeatedly and edit further.

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Reshma Ramesh 13 October 2008

very nice........u should replace all the coz with cause...its poetry...not sms...well done

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Mohammed AlBalushi

Mohammed AlBalushi

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