Tuesday, September 9, 2008

When The Sun Sets Over The Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the sun sets over the ocean
when the moon begins to rest
she sits at the ocean’s beach
its red cloak disappears in the west.
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Mimie Durand
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Howard Savage 15 September 2016

Great poem with a touch of reality and true emotions, and reminiscences.

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Manonton Dalan 09 September 2008

rhyming soul kissing ocean beach soaking those four beautiful feet rest now the sun is down or have a nice maitai for a round thanks love your natures sprinkled poem. thanksmd

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Ency Bearis 09 September 2008

a nice dedication..maybe for your love one...simile/old age..great write... Ency Bearis

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