Wednesday, March 20, 2019

When The World Has Been Putting You Down Comments

Rating: 4.5

When the world has been putting you down
And all you feel coming down is a frown
I'll be there to love and comfort you
For the world will go away but I'll stay through
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Paul Warren
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Richard D Remler 21 March 2019

a nicely penned ballad. Well expressed. tfs

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Practicing Poetess 20 March 2019

A very sweet ballad, Mister Warren. Well done!

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Paul Warren

Paul Warren

ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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