When The World Is Quiet Poem by Amanda The awsome

When The World Is Quiet

Rating: 5.0


When the world is quiet and only you can hear you self speak
You vent your feelings to the moon
It sparkles with the stars stairing at you
You hear nothing but crickets and
a dropp of water fall from somewhere distant
The drops get quicker and quicker
Angrier and angrier
Harder and harder till nothing can stop it
The night sky turns into a ball of hate and anger
It crys out to you
But you stand there
Just stand there
Nothing to take away it's misery
You go to your own world, only caring about your feelings, until someone makes you move and get back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 July 2011

Great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I really liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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