When These Feeling Run Deep Poem by Trenten Traxler

When These Feeling Run Deep

Rating: 4.5


When these feeling run deep. Its more twisted then you see. Its like broken sharp glass, cutting into your skin internally. How really deep is your pain with in? Cutting your veins, going mentally insane. This is more than drained. My eyes can never cry a river. But my mind continues to snow. More like an Minnesota blizzard. It leaves you trap. You have the warm Christmasy days. While my mind continues to make me fade away. Do i need help. I thought i was cut out for this. My mind is racing more than ever. My mind is pacing more than ever. Digging deep like a grave. These are turning into dark discomforting days. Leading into ways that will seem to never fade away.

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Chinedu Dike 07 January 2015

I see depression rearing its ugly head, you need to see a psychologist for counselling. It's a lovely poem, well articulated and penned with insight to capture the depth of the depression that's being felt. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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