When You Left Me Poem by Kayla Lines

When You Left Me



When you left me
I couldn't say goodbye

When you left me
I couldn't even cry

When you left me
time stood still

When you left me
you broke my heart
you ripped it out
and tore it apart

I still feel the ache
of not having you here
I still cry at night

even though it has been many a year

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 23 July 2009

this little poet write from heart and own feels in words When you left me you broke my heart you ripped it out and tore it apart I still feel the ache

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Kayla Lines 23 July 2009

I ardently hope you have not read this before but if you have send me the poem original and i will take this poem down

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Afzal Shauq 22 July 2009

When you left me you broke my heart you ripped it out and tore it apart I still feel the ache of not having you here I still cry at night great poem... rich idea, sweet composition of words, , , verses are well put at there right place.. inspiring way f writing.. and hope you add more to enjoy.. really wonderful piece of poetry... best of luck kayla 10/10

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Milica Franchi De Luri 22 July 2009

Hmm! I am sure i have read this poem before...............

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