{when You Wake} Poem by Lillian Jamison

{when You Wake}

Rating: 3.3


I want you to see this
Upon your waking, my sweetest love
I miss your face
Your arms around me
I hold your love
Wrapped ever tightly around my heart
I feel your hands upon me
I recall your scent of sensuality

I hear your voice
Telling me you need me so
So upon your waking my sweetest love
This I wanted you to know
You make my heart beat
My life you complete
My soul you own
Eternally you are my man

Tuesday, October 2, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: waking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 05 October 2007

most smoochingly scintillating epithet that wakes someone to feel within..the need of some one........most exqusite version of love, , , well penned

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 October 2007

Lucky Guy, indeed....Beautiful versing for anytime of the day...but so amorous to awaken to for certain...Excellent Penning, Ms. Belle! FjR

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Thad Wilk 02 October 2007

Excellent Lillian! ! Lucky guy! (10) ! !

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