Friday, September 9, 2011

Where Beauty Lays Comments

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Where beauty lays
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Where beauty lays
Peaceful in her sleep
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Matthew Holloway
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Stefanie Fontker 09 September 2011

Oh well. All right then, each to their own.

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Matthew Holloway 09 September 2011

Each line 100% intended, if only to offer a different feel and pace. I wrote lies originally but the poem wanted me to write lays so I changed it.

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Stefanie Fontker 09 September 2011

delete* It's contagious it seems, haha.

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Stefanie Fontker 09 September 2011

It's 'where beauty lies, ' you're using the wrong verb. I'm sorry, I couldn't help but say something, I'm sure you've just missed this mistake. Otherwise I like this poem, it's very beautiful. Feel free to delet this comment if you ever get to correcting your typo.

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Matthew Holloway

Matthew Holloway

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