Where Did You Go Poem by John Allen Richter

Where Did You Go

Rating: 2.0


What happened in the coldness
of that room? Could I remember
ice skating? or was that
a painting on the wall?
Do I still have my skates,
rusty blades made me fall - down
in snow tornadoes- slow -
through the sea of puffy coats -
and knit caps with balls on them.
Rosy cheeks going past - saying
something - or other. Something -
certainly something I think -
come and play, play - but falling.
A room with a view -
happy skaters going 'round.
But only on the wall. Madness -
happiness - something -
certainly something -
Something - made me die
in the room with the wall
and the painting said
when you were coming -
and I waited - waited
but they skated and skated.
And so I forgot.
I forgot that I love you.
The painting knows I do.
But it's gone.

Monday, February 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Confessional Poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 February 2015

Very much wonderful poem with wait and wait of painting. The wall of memory still shines through words. Nice imagery makes this special poem really.

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John Allen Richter

John Allen Richter

Richmond, In
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