Where Were You Poem by Sara Panicali

Where Were You



</>where were you
when I was feeling down
no body to talk to
or anywhere to go

where were you
when I needed help
and tried ending my own life
I was in the hospital ready to die
and so close to letting go
the doctors didn't even know why
or how I was still alive
where were you
when I needed you the most

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 11 November 2011

Again I like the this line. it is the core of your poem. Your poem circled around it, in the end a brilliant poem was produced by you Sara! 10++++++++ 'where were you when I was feeling down'

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Kevin Patrick 07 November 2011

I love your stream of consciounce writing it allows you to formulate ideas with clarity and brevity with great sincerity. Another good work sara

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