</>where were you
when I was feeling down
no body to talk to
or anywhere to go
where were you
when I needed help
and tried ending my own life
I was in the hospital ready to die
and so close to letting go
the doctors didn't even know why
or how I was still alive
where were you
when I needed you the most
I love your stream of consciounce writing it allows you to formulate ideas with clarity and brevity with great sincerity. Another good work sara
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Again I like the this line. it is the core of your poem. Your poem circled around it, in the end a brilliant poem was produced by you Sara! 10++++++++ 'where were you when I was feeling down'