When I Feel I Can'T Go On Poem by Sara Panicali

I have tried twice to comment on your poem but for some reason the system keeps deleting it. I find I am right that this world is out to get me and that I am not trusted by anyone. I like your poem though.

Sara, thank s for sharing your poem- a definite 10! It gives me hope for when I feel as if I can't go on. I think of the people I love and who love me. Feel free to read any of my poems. Just to say that a lot of them may be incomprehensible or strange because they have allusions to how it is living with schizophrenia which is an illness not well understood by many people. I look forward to reading more of your poetry! -Claudia

Sara, thank you for inviting me to read your poem. I give it a 10. it gives me hope because I have often felt as if I can't go on. Your poem has encouraged me to think of the people in my life who love me and that kind of makes the sad and hopeless thoughts disappear, and as in your poem, as if they were never there. Thank you SO MUCH for sharing. I would love it if you would read any of my poems- just to say though, I am not mentally well and some of my poems might seem strange, incomprehensible or scary because many of them refer to how it is living with schizophrenia. In any case, I look forward to reading more of your poetry!

I really like this poem. Super job!

Great poem, when all seems bad the heart of Your children can get you through anything. A great poem.