Where Were You? Poem by Jeline Loh

Where Were You?



You were all sweet and persistence to me
You gave me the world to have me
You pursued me relentlessly
Well I said yes finally

I trusted you for your commitment
I thought I owned you completely
You know me as a perfectionist
I gave you my heart willingly

Everything else seems to be your priority
Now, I am never the first in your mind
Everyone tells me I am just a minority
Now, I realized I am silly to be kind

Where were you when I needed you
Where were you when I am alone
Where were you when I call you
Why were you my first and we are done!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Anyone feels me? You know you have someone going after you and making you the queen before you chose him as a partner while you never will lower your standard but based on you thinking you will be deeply loved and Adored, decided to give love a chance. Now you're in it, you realize where is the love? Am I not better on my own?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 17 June 2012

Where were you when I needed you Where were you when I am alone Where were you when I call you Why were you my first and we are done! sadly and mostly these questions reverberate alll over mother earth.....no echoes and no answers nice write cheers

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