While I Cry Poem by Deadly Sacrifice

While I Cry



The world goes on,
When I'm in despair.
The world goes on,
Without me there.

People wil laugh.
People will sing.
People will dance.
People will walk right past me.
All while I cry.

While I cry,
life goes on.
While I cry,
I wish I... Would die.

Inside my cage,
there is my soul.
It's full of rage,
and so very cold.

My flame of life,
is about to go out.
I'm so full of srtife,
I just wanna shout!

While I cry,
I say goodbye.
While I cry,
I slowly die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 23 July 2009

The world goes on, When I'm in despair. The world goes on, Without me there. People laugh. People sing. People dance. People go on. i really liked the beginning: but for me the rest kinda fell apart. thats just me though :) i like your other poems

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