Whispering Poem by Pointless Sixx

Whispering

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As i hold you in the dark i feel you breathing in my arms
your warmth coming off of you and onto me i heard you sigh
i feel your soft hair on my face than i say 'lets make a promise that if you ever leave me you will promise to come back' and and than you say 'i promise' you start to cry and than i hold you tighter and say 'don't cry i hate you'
you just laugh and say 'your aren't really seeing me cry'
i laugh to but then i hold you close to me when you fell asleep
i whisper ever so quietly 'i love you'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adrian Cordova 16 April 2010

Yes, that is truly love, kudos to you

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