Friday, April 28, 2023

Whispers To The Night Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

I whispered to the stars about you,
How your smile shimmers like morning dew,
How your laughter sings through the night,
Like a symphony, full of delight.
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Lilac Papillon
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Bri Edwards 30 May 2023

As a VERB, plight has been used in marriage ceremonies: 'Plight one's troth Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster 3 days ago: to promise to marry someone' AND we KNOW a marriage can be good or bad. : )

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Luna Skye 07 June 2023

Noted! Thanks very much, I will definitely consider your comments👍

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Bri Edwards 30 May 2023

Last stanza: plight: 'noun a condition, state, or situation, especially an unfavorable or unfortunate one: to find oneself in a sorry plight.' I tend to think of pllight as somthing unpleasant, but it's a rather inexact word to use.

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Bri Edwards 30 May 2023

Well, I like the Poet's Notes-poem. LIne 8: I'd use 'of' between 'And' and 'your'. 5 stars. nice rhyming. This poem reminds me of your bio.here.

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