Saturday, November 19, 2005

Whistles And Laughter Comments

Rating: 4.9

BOOZE and rusty nails,
a brutal wind, carrying
your manic smile, traffic
lights, with matching luggage,
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Ruby Root 08 September 2006

Hi David, very different again and unique. I like how you describe botching it up. You have a fun way of expressing yourself sometimes. Take care David, Excellent poem.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 19 November 2005

There's an image 'painted' I'd have to investigate with all its possibilities. alcohol and loneliness will sometimes find us with 'tolerated' company! At least until the end..or the sobering. Whichever we are 'relieved' to discover. LSP Nice work.

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