White Hairs Poem by Lotlot Diaz

White Hairs



White hairs are vestiges of pain-
A sign of success and of fame.
But when you are and have done nothing good,
White hairs are a symbol of shame.

Saturday, December 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem of mine is just my opinion,
and it has no other meaning for me but just its rhythm.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi A 18 December 2016

White hairs - you mean old age? Yes. If we haven't done anything real to the world, old age, nay, life itself can be a symbol of nothingness. Good idea being put in verses. Vestiges of pain - a sign of success and of fame. Both lines do not match together in my view. Pain, success and fame - all won't go together. Kindly check. Wish you best of luck with your pen in the years to come.

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